Step up to the line
Its game time
Shake your opponent’s hand
Its game time
Step up to the line
Serve
Bump
Set
Spike
Step up to the line
Serve
Dig
Set
Spike
Step up to the line
Shake your opponent’s hand
Game over
Darren S - Period 1
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4 comments:
bro i like the you used onomatopetia with the 1,2,3...you go thru the whole progess as the volleyball game. cause the same way its starts it ends by accepting the other team and doing a job and send them on their way
jason jeffries 8th
I have seen very few poeple wriute poems like this. Its one of the reasons why its interesting and caught my attention. I Like how it makes you think about an actual game in action wen Onomonopoeia was used...make you want to play the game.
D. I like how this is pretty much coming from your own season/ife. But for real though, I like the form, diction, and syntax in which you made this poem. I like the speed of this poem as well though. Short, Sweet, straight to the point. very good.
-Ashton M.
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