Your touch disperses an alluring vibrant sensation
Sometimes you fill my stomach with the sharpest aches
Along with adverse reactions, you fulfill the desired effect of my medication
You are the cause and the cure of my heartbreaks
If seeing you is worth walking 100 miles
With all my might I will try
Because you were always there to make me smile
Despite the many times you made me cry
You lay in my sky as the brightest star
So precious yet so far
You speak to me using the harshest words
But speak so highly of my worth
Like a fresh suture in open-heart surgery
You close the wound for it to heal, but the pain afterwards lingers excessively
Loving you is like ripping my heart out
Expressing it involves me having to suffer
You can tell me what I want to hear
But what does it take to acknowledge what we have for each other
The feeling is flawless
Honestly it’s something I can’t describe
I know if I was to lose that feeling
It would feel like losing my life
Something I couldn’t conquer
Because what we have is true
And the most important truth is…
The cause and cure is you
Inspired by You Fit Into Me
Simone S.- Period 8
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4 comments:
i feel u. dang dat was crazy true. jasmine j
Simone this is a beautiful poem. What I got from it was that you love somebody so much, but the relationship is causing so much pain but at the same time it is a beautiful love that you don't want to be without. I loved the imagery that you used to describe the pain and the love that you are feeling.
Jasmine B.
This was a deep poem i feel you on how you feel about how you love somebody i like your use of methaphors and imagery in this poem you describe your pain and i feel it this really was a beautiful poem.
Micah W. 3rd period
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