As we gaze into each others eyes
of lies,
We realize we need to unlock the binds and ties.
Deep down we feel we need each other but in reality we
don’t or we just won’t allow ourselves to.
The love is not there or we just don’t care enough to address it.
And that’s when it all ends.
But in the end, you always know the truth.
Jasmine B.- Period 1
Inspired by: Life
English IV - Period 1
left to right: Brian, Amber, Michael, Jasmine, Carl, Sydney, Ronald, Anesia, Brandon, Xavier, Christian, Darrel, Jasmine
English IV - Period 3
left to right: Charley, Akeem, J'nissi, Steven, Brandon, Larry, Eboni, Jasmine, Destry, Rakita, Brittany, Brittany, Kendrick, Ashley, Darcell, Kameron, Preston, Marquise, Darryl
English IV - Period 8
left to right: Kelsey, Simone, Manuel, Marcus, Allene, Shadae, Amaris, Ashley, Jennie, Rachel, Chernin, Kiara, Mackeya, LaPortia, Carla, Jason, Roderick, Kimberly, Emill, Amen-Rah, Steven, Margery, Jabari, Cordelro, Derrick, Raven
4 comments:
I guess it was Nice....No Im j/p It was well written... I see a few assoance... Its a nice poem
The comment above is from Sydney B
you use consonance when you say "As we gaze into each others eyes
of lies,
We realize", you tone of the poem was being serious loving this person so much that you want them to kno if it doesnt workout they will know you love them
jason jeffries 8th period
BEATIFUL POEM! i love the whole perspective of the poem and how she uses life ways to describe how she feels about the relationship
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